No, I haven’t actually started on my rewrite yet, but I think I’ve now realized just where it was I messed up. Ugh, such an amateur mistake: outlining! It’s the one thing I never did during the treatment process, and I realize now just how much the lack of a formal outline had messed things up. I had a beginning, I had an end and… that was it, really. Without an outline to guide me on what was supposed to be happening in which scene (and where each scene was supposed to be in relation to each other), it’s no wonder things are going literally nowhere. Mmph.
But… That’ll have to wait. It’s going to be another busy workday tomorrow, and I can’t afford to be drowsy. I do hope to be able to finish this when I get home, but that’s providing I’m not fatigued out of my mind again.